Choices, Second Chapter, Beta Readers


Today the First Chapter was finished, with all the possible choices.

A Flowchart was made, of the different consequences for every choice made in the game.

We also developed a list of the total chapters of the Visual Novel. We want to be sure to finish the Jam at a good point in the game, so we have decided to work on the Chapters from first to third. The Visual Novel will probably consist of 6 to 8 chapters, so a good half of the Novel is going to be hella ready to play by September. We will keep working on it until it's finished of course, but we want to make it so that it will give you a nice cliffhanger for the end of the Jam and you'll keep wanting more!

The Second Chapter was also started, and I have to tell you, I really enjoy writing about the characters. There's such an alchemy between them. I want to represent Ra'shak at his best: he's a traditional dark elf, with his particular point of view, and this is going to be crucial in the game, so I want to be sure that the player understand what they're reading.

I also want to welcome my new Beta Readers, Suitas and Sselene Peredhell! Thanks for helping me with the english and the writing bit.

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